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Sastav iz engleskog - HITNO

Akiris pon 21.5.2012 22:20

Pozdrav.

U pitanju je moj sastav iz engleskog koji je bio kao priprema pred skolsku pismenu zadacu.. but the problem is : Nisam siguran za gramatičke greške, stoga, molim vas, ako mozete prepraviti neku rijec, glagog, ako nije napisana ispravno.. u pravom gl. vremenu...

 

Sastav:

I got up in the morning,  and went to school. On my way to school, suddenly it began to snow. There was arleady some kind of snow on the road, but not that much. In short time, when I was crossing down the street, a lot of cars got stuck in snow.

I was in panic, when I saw that many cars, buses, and people got stuck on their way. When I finaally arrived at my classroom I saw that all my teachers were in panic.... I was talking to my friends, but we also noticed that it didn't ring for first hour.

We were waiting for someone to appear, and then our biology teacher told us that we have to go home, because of snow, cold weather, and many other things. We got outside, but snow covered our way... I left my school bag in snow, so I got more chance to escape from that natural disaster(bilo je to get out of there.. ali nat.disas. mi je vise upecatljivo)... It was so hard to get out of there... After few hours I got back to my school in bots, and picked up my bag and went home..

 

Slobodno izmjenite sadrzaj ako se nesto ne uklapa.. 

softwaremaniac uto 22.5.2012 16:06
Akiris kaže...

Pozdrav.

U pitanju je moj sastav iz engleskog koji je bio kao priprema pred skolsku pismenu zadacu.. but the problem is : Nisam siguran za gramatičke greške, stoga, molim vas, ako mozete prepraviti neku rijec, glagog, ako nije napisana ispravno.. u pravom gl. vremenu...

 

Sastav:

I got up in the morning,  and went to school. On my way to school, suddenly it started snowing. There was alreadysome kind of snow on the road, but not that much. After a little while, when I was crossing down the street, a lot of cars got stuck in  snow.

I was in panic, when I saw that many cars, buses, and people getting stuck on their way. When I finally came to my classroom I saw that all my teachers were panicking.... I was talking to my friends, but we also noticed that it didn't ring for the end of the first class.

We were waiting for someone to show up, but then our biology teacher told us that we had to go home, because of snow, cold weather, and many other things. We got outside, but snow blocked our way... I left my school bag in  snow, so I got more chance to escape from that natural disaster(bilo je to get out of there.. ali nat.disas. mi je vise upecatljivo)... It was so hard to get out of there... After a few hours I got back to my school in boots, and picked up my bag and went home..

 

Slobodno izmjenite sadrzaj ako se nesto ne uklapa.. 

Evo par ispravaka. Ovo u žutom ne razumijem.

FileFicho sri 23.5.2012 06:22

Da ne otvaam novu temu možete li meni raći da li je ovo dobro napisan sastavak ? :

She first started skiing at the age of three and began training at nine years old. She quickly became successful and won several junior competitions. Her father Ante was also her trainer and her older brother Ivica Kostelić. At the age of 16, Janica was selected for the Croatian team for the 1998 Winter Olympics in Nagano. She was specialist for all ski disciplines. Her biggest opponent was Swedish skier Anja Paerson. 2006. Janica had to leave ski career because of knee injury. Until then she won four Olympic gold medals.and she was five time Snow Queen. Now she lives with her boyfriend in Zagreb.

Karlovac_047 ned 31.3.2013 15:47

79€ {#} i javi mi se na P.M.

 

Salim se...Kako mislis tako proci maturu ? Napisi ono sto znas, jer ako razumijes nesto, dobiti ces pozitivnu. Kaj ako te bude usmeno pitala ? A ti pojma nemas o nicemu..Nejde to tako..Uhvati se knjige

Karlovac_047 ned 31.3.2013 15:49
Adoooooooooooo kaže...
Adoooooooooooo kaže...

treba mi jedan sastav iz engleskog hitno 

tema je "it is a good story"

mozeli mi iko pomoc treba mi brzoooo

Ne moze!

 

Jer padobranci kao ti ulete ovdje na forum sa bezveznim postom i poslije se nikada nece te prijaviti na ovaj forum.

Adoooooooooooo ned 31.3.2013 15:49
Karlovac_047 kaže...

79€ {#} i javi mi se na P.M.

 

Salim se...Kako mislis tako proci maturu ? Napisi ono sto znas, jer ako razumijes nesto, dobiti ces pozitivnu. Kaj ako te bude usmeno pitala ? A ti pojma nemas o nicemu..Nejde to tako..Uhvati se knjige

meni sutra treba pismena 

ali sad nemam vremena pa ako bi mi mogao pomoci bio bih ti zahvallan

zelenbic ned 31.3.2013 15:58

 

  It all started when our antagonizing protagonist, Jack, woke up in a foxy forest. It was the seventh time it had happened. Feeling ridiculously displeased, Jack attacked a ripened avocado, thinking it would make him feel better (but as usual, it did not). Duly ecstatic about the looming crises, he realized that his beloved dildo was missing!  Immediately he called his vicariously jealous friend, Ann. Jack had known Ann for (plus or minus) 153 years, the majority of which were exotic ones.  Ann was unique. She was congenial though sometimes a little... insensitive. Jack called her anyway, for the situation was urgent.

 

  Ann picked up to a very mad Jack. Ann calmly assured him that most disease-carrying chipmunks sneeze before mating, yet man-eating capybaras usually surreptitiously cringe *after* mating. She had no idea what that meant; she was only concerned with distracting Jack.  Why was Ann trying to distract Jack?  Because she had snuck out from Jack's with the dildo only five days prior.  It was a curious little dildo... how could she resist?

 

  It didn't take long before Jack got back to the subject at hand: his dildo. Ann shuddered. Relunctantly, Ann invited him over, assuring him they'd find the dildo. Jack grabbed his hammock and disembarked immediately. After hanging up the phone, Ann realized that she was in trouble. She had to find a place to hide the dildo and she had to do it aggressively. She figured that if Jack took the amphibious vehicle, she had take at least eight minutes before Jack would get there.  But if he took the tricycle?  Then Ann would be alarmingly screwed.

 

  Before she could come up with any reasonable ideas, Ann was interrupted by five dimwitted durexs that were lured by her dildo. Ann panicked; 'Not again', she thought. Feeling relieved, she aggressively reached for her ripened avocado and carefully deflowered every last one of them. Apparently this was an adequate deterrent--the discouraged critters began to scurry back toward the lemur-infested moor, squealing with discontent. She exhaled with relief.  That's when she heard the tricycle rolling up.  It was Jack.

 

----o0o---- 

 

  As he pulled up, he felt a sense of urgency. He had had to make an unscheduled stop at McDonald's to pick up a 12-pack of dull pencils, so he knew he was running late.  With a deft leap, Jack was out of the tricycle and went surreptitiously jaunting toward Ann's front door.  Meanwhile inside,  Ann was panicking.  Not thinking, she tossed the dildo into a box of dangerous oil-soaked rags and then slid the box behind her giraffe. Ann was exasperated but at least the dildo was concealed.  The doorbell rang.

 

  'Come in,' Ann wildly purred.  With a careful push, Jack opened the door.  'Sorry for being late, but I was being chased by some selfish beer-sloshed tool in a deliciously practical 4-door,' he lied.  'It's fine,' Ann assured him. Jack took a seat ridiculously far from where Ann had hidden the dildo. Ann sighed trying unsuccessfully to hide her nervousness.  'Uhh, can I get you anything?' she blurted.  But Jack was distracted. Ever so extemperaneously, Ann noticed a funny-smelling look on Jack's face. Jack slowly opened his mouth to speak.

 

  '...What's that smell?'

 

  Ann felt a stabbing pain in her scalp when Jack asked this.  In a moment of disbelief, she realized that she had hidden the dildo right by her oscillating fan. 'Wh-what?  I don't smell anything..!'  A lie.  A clueless look started to form on Jack's face. He turned to notice a box that seemed clearly out of place. 'Th-th-those are just my grandma's gerbils from when she used to have pet albino cats.  She, uh...dropped 'em by here earlier'. Jack nodded with fake acknowledgement...then, before Ann could react, Jack recklessly lunged toward the box and opened it.  The dildo was plainly in view.

 

  Jack stared at Ann for what what must've been nine minutes. In a tragically predictable turn of events, Ann groped charismatically in Jack's direction, clearly desperate. Jack grabbed the dildo and bolted for the door.  It was locked. Ann let out a striking chuckle. 'If only you hadn't been so protective of that thing, none of this would have happened, Jack,' she rebuked. Ann always had been a little pestering, so Jack knew that reconciliation was not an option; he needed to escape before Ann did something crazy, like... start chucking potatos at her or something. Duly ecstatic about the looming crises, he gripped his dildo tightly and made a dash toward the window, diving headlong through the glass panels.

 

  Ann looked on, blankly. 'What the hell?  That seemed excessive.  The other door was open, you know.' Silence from Jack. 'And to think, I varnished that window frame two days ago...it never ends!' Suddenly she felt a tinge of concern for Jack. 'Oh.  You ..okay?' Still silence. Ann walked over to the window and looked down. Jack was gone.

 

----o0o---- 

 

  Just yonder, Jack was struggling to make his way through the foxy forest behind Ann's place. Jack had severely hurt his ear during the window incident, and was starting to lose strength.  Another pack of feral durexs suddenly appeared, having caught wind of the dildo.  One by one they latched on to Jack.  Already weakened from his injury, Jack yielded to the furry onslaught and collapsed.  The last thing he saw before losing consciousness was a buzzing horde of durexs running off with his dildo.

 

  About eight hours later, Jack awoke, his prostate throbbing.  It was dark and Jack did not know where he was.  Deep in the muddy magical cornfield, Jack was very lost. Before anyone could take off their pants, he remembered that his dildo was taken by the durexs. But at that point, he was just thankful for his life.  That's when, to his horror, a bloated durex emerged from the lemur-infested moor.  It was the alpha durex. Jack opened his mouth to scream but was cut short when the durex sunk its teeth into Jack's kidney. With a faint groan, the life escaped from Jack's lungs, but not before he realized that he was a failure.

 

  Less than eight miles away, Ann was entombed by anguish over the loss of the dildo.  'MY PRECIOUS!!' she cried, as she reached for a sharpened dull pencil.  With a quick thrust, she buried it deeply into her armpit.  As the room began to fade to black, she thought about Jack... wishing she had found the courage to tell him that she loved him.  But she would die alone that day.  All that remained was the dildo that had turned them against each other, ultimately causing their demise.  And as the dew on melancholy sappling branches began to reflect the dawn's reddish glare, all that could be heard was the chilling cry of distant durexs, desecrating all things sacred to virtuous men, and perpetuating an evil that would reign for centuries to come.  Our heroes would've lived unhappily ever after, but they were too busy being dead.  So, no one lived forever after, the end. :'(

 

LOLz!!1

 

 

haxon ned 1.12.2013 21:47

PREVOD HITNO.UNAPRIJED HVALA 

 

zivot u proslosti je bio veoma tezak i dosadan. ljudi nisu imali mnogo toga pa su imali jako mnogo slobodnog vremena. slobodno vrijeme su cesto provodili u kuci sa svojom porodicom. iako je kuca bila hladna i mracna znali su se zabaviti. u skole nisu svi isli, samo bogati. siromasno stanovnistvo je ostalo nepismeno. u tom periodu ljudi nisu imali televizora,kompjutera pa vjerujem da im je bilo dosadno. vecina ljudi nije imalo ni vode ni struje. zivjeli su u groznim uslovima ali su opet bili zadovoljni . u sadasnosti ljudi imaju mnogo toga, ali nemaju one topline i ljubavi u srcu kao sto su tada ljudi imali

chutac ned 1.12.2013 22:32
haxon kaže...

PREVOD HITNO.UNAPRIJED HVALA

 

zivot u proslosti je bio veoma tezak i dosadan. ljudi nisu imali mnogo toga pa su imali jako mnogo slobodnog vremena. slobodno vrijeme su cesto provodili u kuci sa svojom porodicom. iako je kuca bila hladna i mracna znali su se zabaviti. u skole nisu svi isli, samo bogati. siromasno stanovnistvo je ostalo nepismeno. u tom periodu ljudi nisu imali televizora,kompjutera pa vjerujem da im je bilo dosadno. vecina ljudi nije imalo ni vode ni struje. zivjeli su u groznim uslovima ali su opet bili zadovoljni . u sadasnosti ljudi imaju mnogo toga, ali nemaju one topline i ljubavi u srcu kao sto su tada ljudi imali

  Life in the past was difficult and boring. People didn't have much, so they had a lot of free time. They would usually spend their free time in house with their relatives. Although the house had been cold they would manage to have fun. Not everyone would go to school, just wealthy people. Poor residents were illiterate. In that period there was no TV nor PC so I believe it had been boring for them. Not everyone had electricity nor water supply. They lived in ghastly conditions, but despite that, they were satisfied. In the present, people have a lot of things, but, there is no love and warmth in their hearts as before, in the past.

 

Ja bih rekao da je ovo ok {#}

zerocool12 pon 9.12.2013 20:22
Maxo069 kaže...

Hitno mi treba sastav na temu "Famous person" ako je moguce sto pre ... Hvala unaprijed.

Last morning I woke up as an famous person. I was rich and had a lot of bitches around me.

So as I woke up next to hot twins with huge tits, my boner stood as high as Mt. Everest.

After morning sex, I went to the shower and washed my balls. As I got out of my house I entered my red ferrari.

There was hot blonde waiting for me in my ferrari,she was sucking my d*ck through all the driving, it was great.

Then I entered my personal office and woke up realising how f*cked up life really is.

 

Nema na čemu ;)

Strm pon 9.12.2013 20:31
Maxo069 kaže...

Hitno mi treba sastav na temu "Famous person" ako je moguce sto pre ... Hvala unaprijed.

Aj em fejmos persan and aj liv in hjuđe vila vith biđez al araund me.Gud baj.

i_rambo_plache pon 9.12.2013 20:34

Maxo069 kaže...


Hitno mi treba sastav na temu "Famous person" ako je moguce sto pre ... Hvala unaprijed.




Ne slušaj ovo dvoje, pišu bezveze. Ja sam profesor engleskog u osnovnoj školi pa sam nešto na brzinu sklopio. Petica zagarantirana!


 


I will now write about Brad Pitt. He has 49 years and he is from America. He is the very good actor and I am liking to watch his movie's. He is acting in many movie's. He has lots of money and big house's and many car's. He is marryed to Angelina Jolie who is also the very good actor. They adopted childrens from Africa because their a good people. My Brad Pitts best movie is Ocean's Eleven. His role is thief of casino and he has his ten friends who helped him in robbery of casino. It is very excited and fun movie.